when I see you

I hide, dream, blush and
contemplate an approach to
reveal my unruly love

575 Haiku

-Raxtus

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12 thoughts on “when I see you

  1. You have a nice blog of poetry here. It welcomes readers without overwhelming them.
    This poem has a nice idea, but I couldn’t help in noticing the last line seemed a bit long to fit five syllables. If my counting was correct, there were seven syllables. You may be using a different system of counting or working with syllables, but I thought I’d tell you. Otherwise, the poem was lovely!
    Also, thank you for the follow! I’m glad you liked my latest poem. Feel free to stop by anytime to bounce ideas, chat, or shoot me a prompt if you’d like!
    -Author S

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