collapsed on red stained

cobbles dreamers lie amongst

translucent bottles

5-7-5 Haiku

Hey exponentialepigram,

This one is inspired by your work. Share-Like-Follow.

All suggestions are welcome in the comments.



5 thoughts on “intoxicated

  1. This (I’ve read it several times) perfectly captures the hard-boiled nonsense brain-dead potato people hustled in chicken coop apartment quartered and angry pedantic fistfuls of processed animal by-product
    human waste-animated flesh sacks my cynical mind fights with, daily.

    ,or I am reading myself in your mosaic.
    either way,
    thank you.


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